Vista from The Foggy Privilege Observation Balcony
Thick, fat hearts make dirty milk
and cheese out of poorly-quoted
marbled verses.
And in every chamber of these hearts
they play elevator music titled:
predictable prophetic hypocrisy
that reads from right to left,
and even sometimes,
from left to right.
But don’t take my word for it,
just listen from one ear to the other
because the music’s coming on again:
They said we wouldn’t have such problems if—
and what are these problems?
if this group or that group—
what makes “they” they?
weren’t invading our schools,
is it your school?
or changing our ways.
What has changed about your life?
Let’s try another example, such as I heard someone say:
It’s a lack of fathers, and this is why
we have crime and problems.
Now show me the child who does not want a father.
Maybe we don’t see quite clearly through our milky vantage,
Perhaps, you’ve worked for what you wanted, but
you have been given everything you need.
This is really good. Great balance of poetic imagery and point making.
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Yes agreed Josephine. The points are underlined by the poetics.
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sweeping statements spoken without thought – and clearly shown here
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Reblogged this on smithsurf and commented:
Writers Against Prejudice: Number 4
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Thank you 💐
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Very insightful and elegant poem – have reblogged
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Reblogged this on Carolyn O' Connell and commented:
Very elegantly insightful
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